[deleted] Bottom text's background is too dark. And it feels empty as well. Im assuming you just discovered the layer effects on Photoshop, please learn each function and use them appropriately
Guts It's not terrible, just keep practicing and I'm sure you will see some really nice improvements! 😃
Eli Ayase The design itself is very nice, but I think the black outline is a bit crusted and takes away from the quality. Maybe make it bolder and feather the edges. Unless that's the intention, in that it's meant to look crusted, then good job!
Revantu I'd go with a bit more space between those letters, their font + colors aren't that great for readability. Perhaps also switch to a light metallic grey background, and make the vignette effect stronger.
dai1313 Definately the readability of that text is a concern. If it were me, I'd do a red outline over the darker and harder to read parts, then fade that outline out towards the center of the text.
