Rate my T-shirt design?

Fistsworn

I'm not an artist but wanna start a T-shirt shop :sigh:

Here's the first one:

https://shop.spreadshirt.it/1077374?noCache=true

Gonna do like a bunch of stuff, but slowly cause well I'm not an artists so it takes a bit of time to design stuff...

But yeah I would like an opinion and some tips if you don''t mind that is.

Eli Ayase

When it comes to mass shirt printing, thin lines get messed up so I'd be careful for that (at least from my experience from a few years ago).

Akko

Looks pretty empty to be honest

Fistsworn

Karma wrote
Looks pretty empty to be honest

Yes indeed, I did only one shirt lol...
There are print limits though that sucks cause there's a systematic love print that I'd love if they aproove it.

Eli Ayase wrote
When it comes to mass shirt printing, thin lines get messed up so I'd be careful for that (at least from my experience from a few years ago).

Thanks! I never thought of that! I'll try not to screw up.

[deleted]

Hard for me to see the black on the red imo

Silver

red is too dark imo

Fistsworn

Thanks for the opinions!!!
I'll try to twerk som clours then...

Fistsworn

A super huge Thanks to @"Victory" for this design:

A litle closer? sure:

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Victory

Fistsworn wrote
A super huge Thanks to @"Victory" for this design:

A litle closer? sure:

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Whoever drew this garbage should be shot.