pretty good, the first voice reminds me of Badger from Breaking Bad (the show) i dig the rap voices and the beat was great and unique. keep posting as you make more! Did you draw the album art or just get an image and add the text? if you did draw it it'd be cool if all songs had different covers that worked as different comic/manga panels when place one after another in album order. Maybe going through a dream or multiple dreams and at the end you wake up? just a thought
The instrumental after this from sounclouds related was pretty nice
Also I'm really tired of "kid" something as rap names Kid Cudi is the only exception. couldn't it just be MOS? or have it be a backronym M.O.S and think of something creative for it to mean?