A bit of a story

  • Yoru Hashimoto 01-28-2018, 05:47 PM (Edited 01-28-2018, 05:53 PM)
    Hey Guys. I've been offline for almost a year, but I'm back and stranger than ever. Anyway, I've recently considered writing a story. I've finally started on it, and I am going to upload it as I progress. Just thought I'd share the beginning. I'd love feedback (^~^)

    https://my.w.tt/UiNb/LYByVJMo5J

    -Yoru Hashimoto
  • Backlash 01-28-2018, 06:01 PM
    (01-28-2018, 05:47 PM)Yoru Hashimoto Wrote: Hey Guys. I've been offline for almost a year, but I'm back and stranger than ever. Anyway, I've recently considered writing a story. I've finally started on it, and I am going to upload it as I progress. Just thought I'd share the beginning. I'd love feedback (^~^)

    https://my.w.tt/UiNb/LYByVJMo5J

    -Yoru Hashimoto


    Ooh, this looks great! Will definitely be reading it once I feel a little better. ^^
  • Yoru Hashimoto 01-28-2018, 06:08 PM
    Hehe I hope you enjoy the intro. I'm still finalising the full story but I'm working on the first Chapter ^^

    -Yoru Hashimoto
  • LucianDreamer 01-29-2018, 09:48 AM
    That book title link is a necessary read for me; I can't wait when it is done. You heroically made my day and a welcome from me!
  • Yoru Hashimoto 01-29-2018, 11:25 AM
    Thank you ^^
    I do try to make the writing good lol.
    I'll keep you guys posted when the first chapter is up

    -Yoru Hashimoto
  • Loko 01-29-2018, 11:44 AM
    Needs a bit of grammar touch up, but other than that it has promise.
  • Yoru Hashimoto 01-29-2018, 11:59 AM
    I-I'll work harder.
    Also I will make sure I double check grammars and stuffs

    -Yoru Hashimoto

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A bit of a story