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06-05-2016, 03:21 PM
#59883 (1)
Criticism is welcome as i would like to improve

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06-05-2016, 03:32 PM
#59885 (2)
Think it looks dope, gg :P

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06-05-2016, 04:12 PM
#59888 (3)
It's good, it feels a little bit empty because background is simple.

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06-05-2016, 10:07 PM
#59894 (4)
Looks nice but gives off an empty vibe due to the background.

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06-05-2016, 10:28 PM
#59895 (5)
Bottom text's background is too dark. And it feels empty as well.

Im assuming you just discovered the layer effects on Photoshop, please learn each function and use them appropriately
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06-06-2016, 01:25 AM
#59896 (6)
This made me wet like aiba makes me wet

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06-06-2016, 12:01 PM
#59900 (7)
It's not terrible, just keep practicing and I'm sure you will see some really nice improvements! :D

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06-06-2016, 12:07 PM
#59901 (8)
the text is really hard to read because of the dark spots in the picture you masked it with.

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06-06-2016, 06:23 PM
#59903 (9)
i told you faaaaam

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06-07-2016, 12:54 AM
#59906 (10)
The design itself is very nice, but I think the black outline is a bit crusted and takes away from the quality. Maybe make it bolder and feather the edges.

Unless that's the intention, in that it's meant to look crusted, then good job!

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06-08-2016, 03:34 PM
#59923 (11)
I'd go with a bit more space between those letters, their font + colors aren't that great for readability. Perhaps also switch to a light metallic grey background, and make the vignette effect stronger.

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09-16-2016, 02:58 AM
#60730 (12)
ayy m8y that's a pretty good one.
background is so not-comfortable. try using another color(s)
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09-16-2016, 06:55 AM
#60734 (13)
Its good but it reminds me a little of ed hardy, which i dunno. Up to you if thats good or not.
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11-15-2016, 10:59 PM (This post was last modified: 11-15-2016, 10:59 PM by dai1313.)
#62956 (14)
Definately the readability of that text is a concern.

If it were me, I'd do a red outline over the darker and harder to read parts, then fade that outline out towards the center of the text.
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11-16-2016, 04:01 PM
#63008 (15)
To be honest it just looks like overlay abuse, but it's not as bad as it could have been.