Looks nice but gives off an empty vibe due to the background.
"From the perspective of others I am part of the world, but when I observe the world from my perspective I am nowhere to be found. To observe is to create perspective. I can never cease to be the point of origin from my perspective. I observe that which is not myself. This is the first principle to find." - Ergo Proxy
I'd go with a bit more space between those letters, their font + colors aren't that great for readability. Perhaps also switch to a light metallic grey background, and make the vignette effect stronger.
"If the truth is a cruel mistress, then lies are that of a nice girl.... ...therefore, I will always hate nice girls" ~ Hikigaya Hachiman (2013)