My Review on sky warrior academy

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03-31-2016, 11:42 AM
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03-31-2016, 12:15 PM
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Another one of those "watch it for the characters' interactions" anime. Shucks.

Not meaning to be rude but you should try proof reading a bit more as I've spotted several grammatical errors (majorly, run-on sentences). Also, just a me opinion, try not to repeat the same word over and over for conjunctive adverbs (however). I liked that your reviews are much more straight to the point than my own tho  :kek:

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Every anime will receive a full response after it's finished airing and will be replaced on this list.
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You can call this 'Drunk Should You Watch' even though it's not written while under the influence of alcohol, just bad anime.
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03-31-2016, 08:47 PM
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(03-31-2016, 12:15 PM)Eli Ayase Wrote: Another one of those "watch it for the characters' interactions" anime. Shucks.

Not meaning to be rude but you should try proof reading a bit more as I've spotted several grammatical errors (majorly, run-on sentences). Also, just a me opinion, try not to repeat the same word over and over for conjunctive adverbs (however). I liked that your reviews are much more straight to the point than my own tho  :kek:

Thanks for reply, write it well drunk and no sleep in 2 days I think, Its not a bad anime just story is like walking along glass.