My first AMV.

by Zoro

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05-06-2016, 09:58 AM
#58864 (1)
Yo guys today I made an One Punch Man AMV. I am just starting I have no editing experience and I wish to learn more and more.
I know the overlay looks bad and it would be better off without it but had to add it because of copyright issues.
Anyway honest opinions and constructive criticism is appreciated. Also if anyone knows editing and stuff, mind teaching me?

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05-06-2016, 10:18 AM
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Didn't like it.
I mean it's good but I just don't like the music.
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05-06-2016, 11:41 AM
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Dude that music ruins everything :c

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05-06-2016, 11:46 AM
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(05-06-2016, 10:18 AM)Yito Wrote: Didn't like it.
I mean it's good but I just don't like the music.

(05-06-2016, 11:41 AM)Alexander Wrote: Dude that music ruins everything :c

Thanks for opinions. I would like to hear your suggestions.
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05-06-2016, 12:21 PM
#58872 (5)
Ayy you made your first AMV congrats!

Music choice could have been better but it can work with scenes stringed together correctly.

I look forward for more AMVs from you, dropped a subscribe as well.
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05-06-2016, 12:27 PM
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It's pretty good for your first, I've always liked the type though that change clips really quickly using cool transitions and stuff. Is that sony vegas, I want it again but too lazy too find a good download for it. :/

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05-06-2016, 12:30 PM
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Not a fan how how small you made the actual anime footage, and the filter or whatever it was that you applied over it was eh, at best. I would recommend removing all talking pieces from the amv all together along with the subtitles unless you are trying to get a message across.

I'll link a couple of examples of what I mean






"From the perspective of others I am part of the world, but when I observe the world from my perspective I am nowhere to be found. To observe is to create perspective. I can never cease to be the point of origin from my perspective. I observe that which is not myself. This is the first principle to find." - Ergo Proxy
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05-06-2016, 12:51 PM
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(05-06-2016, 12:21 PM)Aiba Wrote: Ayy you made your first AMV congrats!

Music choice could have been better but it can work with scenes stringed together correctly.

I look forward for more AMVs from you, dropped a subscribe as well.

Thank you, I am constantly learning and I hope I could make good amvs soon.

(05-06-2016, 12:27 PM)Yoko Wrote: It's pretty good for your first, I've always liked the type though that change clips really quickly using cool transitions and stuff. Is that sony vegas, I want it again but too lazy too find a good download for it. :/

Thanks, the software I used is Filmora. It is very simple and with good interface. I love the software. It is free but there will be watermark on your videos, so if you don't mind using pirated stuff, I would recommend downloading from kat.cr

(05-06-2016, 12:30 PM)Tenshi Wrote: Not a fan how how small you made the actual anime footage, and the filter or whatever it was that you applied over it was eh, at best. I would recommend removing all talking pieces from the amv all together along with the subtitles unless you are trying to get a message across.

I'll link a couple of examples of what I mean

Yea I know I messed with that overlay, I am still a noob so I am using a simple software with pre-bundled stuff. At first I didn't use the filter but when I uploaded it there was a copyright claim so I removed and added that frame thing. I am constantly watching amvs to get inspired and learn from them. Also I wasn't able to find any good source for the anime without subs. There is no dub version so couldn't help but use them. Anyway thank you and I'll look at those videos :)
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05-06-2016, 03:49 PM
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(05-06-2016, 12:51 PM)Zoro Wrote:
(05-06-2016, 12:30 PM)Tenshi Wrote: Not a fan how how small you made the actual anime footage, and the filter or whatever it was that you applied over it was eh, at best. I would recommend removing all talking pieces from the amv all together along with the subtitles unless you are trying to get a message across.

I'll link a couple of examples of what I mean

Yea I know I messed with that overlay, I am still a noob so I am using a simple software with pre-bundled stuff. At first I didn't use the filter but when I uploaded it there was a copyright claim so I removed and added that frame thing. I am constantly watching amvs to get inspired and learn from them. Also I wasn't able to find any good source for the anime without subs. There is no dub version so couldn't help but use them. Anyway thank you and I'll look at those videos :)

What I will recommend is using raw anime files if you want. I can also invite you to the torrent tracker I use where you can download anime series in Dub, Sub and or Raw if you are looking for a place to get started.

"From the perspective of others I am part of the world, but when I observe the world from my perspective I am nowhere to be found. To observe is to create perspective. I can never cease to be the point of origin from my perspective. I observe that which is not myself. This is the first principle to find." - Ergo Proxy
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05-07-2016, 03:53 AM
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(05-06-2016, 03:49 PM)Tenshi Wrote:
(05-06-2016, 12:51 PM)Zoro Wrote: Yea I know I messed with that overlay, I am still a noob so I am using a simple software with pre-bundled stuff. At first I didn't use the filter but when I uploaded it there was a copyright claim so I removed and added that frame thing. I am constantly watching amvs to get inspired and learn from them. Also I wasn't able to find any good source for the anime without subs. There is no dub version so couldn't help but use them. Anyway thank you and I'll look at those videos :)

What I will recommend is using raw anime files if you want. I can also invite you to the torrent tracker I use where you can download anime series in Dub, Sub and or Raw if you are looking for a place to get started.

Yea that will be of big help. If you have experience with amvs, would mind giving me some tips? :)
I will pm you my email id if you need it to invite me :)
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05-07-2016, 05:16 AM
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Like my suggestion is change the music. That what you put in is too like main stream and its mainly used for intros fo yt channels :D

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