A bit of a story

by Yoru Hashimoto

Yoru Hashimoto
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01-28-2018, 05:47 PM (This post was last modified: 01-28-2018, 05:53 PM by Yoru Hashimoto.)
#75910 (1)
Hey Guys. I've been offline for almost a year, but I'm back and stranger than ever. Anyway, I've recently considered writing a story. I've finally started on it, and I am going to upload it as I progress. Just thought I'd share the beginning. I'd love feedback (^~^)

https://my.w.tt/UiNb/LYByVJMo5J

-Yoru Hashimoto
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01-28-2018, 06:01 PM
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(01-28-2018, 05:47 PM)Yoru Hashimoto Wrote: Hey Guys. I've been offline for almost a year, but I'm back and stranger than ever. Anyway, I've recently considered writing a story. I've finally started on it, and I am going to upload it as I progress. Just thought I'd share the beginning. I'd love feedback (^~^)

https://my.w.tt/UiNb/LYByVJMo5J

-Yoru Hashimoto

Ooh, this looks great! Will definitely be reading it once I feel a little better. ^^

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01-28-2018, 06:08 PM
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Hehe I hope you enjoy the intro. I'm still finalising the full story but I'm working on the first Chapter ^^

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01-29-2018, 09:48 AM
#75927 (4)
That book title link is a necessary read for me; I can't wait when it is done. You heroically made my day and a welcome from me!

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01-29-2018, 11:25 AM
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Thank you ^^
I do try to make the writing good lol.
I'll keep you guys posted when the first chapter is up

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01-29-2018, 11:44 AM
#75929 (6)
Needs a bit of grammar touch up, but other than that it has promise.

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01-29-2018, 11:59 AM
#75930 (7)
I-I'll work harder.
Also I will make sure I double check grammars and stuffs

-Yoru Hashimoto
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